There's a lot going on here. The instruments at the beginning aren't great ngl. And the drop doesn't feel icy as well, save for some color bass-y fills. Mixing is also iffy, and I can hear my headphones pulsing quite a bit. I think a lot of the instrument choices are very haphazard, and do nothing to contribute to the theme, so scale back on that. Melodies are also really weird. Overall, it needs bump ups in the production and mixing aspect, and a lot more work in the theminng realm. Just keep practicing, and you'll see adequate improvement.
Production/Mixing: 5.5/10
Theming: 2.5/10