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The goofy ahh section™ at 1:53 goes hard. What I can only guess is the calliope kind of carries that section. The harpsicord's counter melody is also a very nice contrast to the main-ish melody from the calliope (once again, can only guess it to be).
00:50 - 01:05 feels empty though. Maybe the lack of a hearable bassline is getting to me. Idk. I like B A S S. Also same issue at 02:34 to the end. It also could've had an electric guitar playing. Might've helped to make it more intense. But if it's soundtrap limitations, then I get it.
Honest opinion: The Goofy Section(™)'s start should've been labeled as 01:39 instead of 01:53, but it works out either way.
Either way, it's a very good song. Some weak points, but the strong points shine through enough to make it work out in the end. 8.4/10.
ᵃˡˢᵒ ʰᵒʷ ᵗʰᵉ ᶠᵘᶜᵏ ᵈᵒᵉˢ ᵒⁿᵉ ᵍᵉᵗ ᵗʷᵒ ᶠʳᵒⁿᵗᵖᵃᵍᵉˢ ᶦⁿ ᵃ ʳᵒʷ
ᶦ ᵃˢᵖᶦʳᵉ ᵗᵒ ʰᵃᵛᵉ ᵗʰᶦˢ ˡᵘᶜᵏ ᵃᵗ ᵍᵉᵗᵗᶦⁿᵍ ᶠʳᵒⁿᵗᵖᵃᵍᵉᵈ