One of the most unexpected collabs for me, but I'm completely here for it. Absolute bop.
One of the most unexpected collabs for me, but I'm completely here for it. Absolute bop.
This is such a bop doe
GAH DAMN
This fucking bangs so hard
Filler ahh upload lmao
Though it sounds good, I like the original version more. Same critiques from there apply here though
I might be biased :)
Holy trance. It's good, other than some nitpicks, which I will share both the good and bad:
First part is good. I like the choices of synths. But it just feels a little bit too long duration-wise to me (idk why). Maybe shorten it a bit.
Mix is a bit too muddy from 1:02 to 1:56. If you're gonna rework it, fix some of the volumes/levelling. If you didn't cut any lows, do that. If you did, then maybe it's the volumes. But I like the usage of synths/instruments. Helps give off an uplifting trance vibe.
Also, 1:56 is a bit too empty for me, and it also feels a little too sudden. The feedback with most of it fading out could help it. Otherwise, first drop is perfect production wise. Feels almost like a club song of sorts.
Stylistic choice at 2:23 - Maybe some pads around there, along with small little piano bits here and there to add a bit more emotion.
2:53's transition part is sick and quite funny too. You seemed to have quite a bit of fun with this piece (despite the messiness)
Final part of the song is waaay too similar to the first part. Maybe play around with it a bit more. Mix some things up. Make it different somehow.
Overall, it's a nice song. Very messy, as you said, but I know you've improved a lot production-wise as of recent. Really repetitive, but such is the regular trance song. Also has its own unique charm to it which I can really appreciate. 8.2/10
yeah, i acknowledge the messiness
didnt really like how i made the final drop
be alright is a way better trance song, and tbh trance is just not really my genre
fair points all around, thanks for reviewing and listening!
radon review baby. Let's get it:
This is a very unique start in comparison to what you usually make I must say. I like the ambient approach taken. I just wish that it was a tad bit shorter, or maybe the extra synths could start kicking in at 00:30.
I like the ambiance used at 1:05. Like it symbolizes a new day of sorts. 1:36 - 1:50's thing sounds a bit corny at first. Maybe if I could hear a callback to that at the ending piece, then that would be nice.
02:24's part seems almost a bit empty. Like it needs pads in the background or something along those lines. 02:56's melody is groovy as hell though. Nice job on that. The ending section starting at 03:11 is also nice and smooth. The keys make for a nice tranquil juxtaposition to the rest of the track.. Maybe the riser at 3:25 could be a little bit louder. Not by a lot though.
All in all, solid song. Definitely different from what you normally make. Could use polishing though. I rate it a 8.8/10.
P.S.: Goofy Section™ where
Its ALL goofy section :^D
With the 2:24 part i tried adding lil risers to add collage, I tried adding a pad but it was just too laggy lmao
I think i did otherdo the length of the starting chords maybe but oh well
ty for review
Kick could be better, and snare could be a bit louder. But for 30 minutes, it's not bad at all. I've made worse in 2 hours :|
nice
I still gotta fix the kick, and I’ll note it down for the snare!!
"It's a beautiful day in the neighborhood" ahh song
It's good though. I like the cheery vibe I'm getting. Only thing is that the piano can get very old after hearing it for such a long while.
Maybe try and mix it up a little bit at the drop section, or even adding delay and reverb to it in the beginning could help, and having it switch to only reverb in the interlude & drop sections.
Otherwise, I like it quite a bit. Good job mate
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